Suzanne portraits

[Dave Barker]

Had a small (4 members) portrait session last tuesday 2nd march with me ,Rob,Mick and Andy .Rob had organised  getting the model called Suzanne through the website "Purestorm" and we all had a productive and chilly (heating was not working) time .Comments and criticism are all appreciated.

[Ian Wells]

Some nice shots Dave, the last one is to tightly cropped for me. You possible needs to tidy the models hair up a little bit in Photoshop as there are a few too many loose ends

Ian.

[Rajdeep Sandhu]

I like them all. The first probably needs some separation between the top of her stockings and the blackground. A bit of dodging or painting on a soft light layer with White at low opacity over the stockings to improve definition, maybe? (bearing in mind that I am viewing these on an iPhone.)

The second is beautiful. I like the use of space. The third reminds me of a carefree but sophisticated look. I am tempted to try a pure black and White with slightly increased contrast to get rich blacks for a kind of sophisticated glamour noir look.

[Dave Barker]

The third reminds me of a carefree but sophisticated look. I am tempted to try a pure black and White with slightly increased contrast to get rich blacks for a kind of sophisticated glamour noir look.

Ok ,i've slightly altered it ,pure B&W and increased the contrast .Any better 

[Rajdeep Sandhu]

In comparison, the toned image does look better. I stand corrected.